Today we had to create a google drawing. I had to put down six descriptive writing sentences from our book. Our focus this week was on actions can you figure out which one is based on actions? Do you see any simile's, alliteration, adverbs, metaphors?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, November 26, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Alexi,
ReplyDeleteWow! What great sentences. I noticed alliteration in Furious Fred. I really enjoyed the sentence 'Unexpectedly, the characters came out of the book.' It really grabbed me and I wanted to read me.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader